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It is the next day and you are thinking even harder about the little contest the twins are having. It is really hard to choose, but one is standing out more romantically.. while the other is trying to push you into something. Only if he could be more romantic. Of course you are thinking about what happened last night and the other twin, Hikaru. And lucky you today you get to see him a lot!

“So (f/n)...” Hikaru says softly. He is not acting like his normal self where is the, “Pick me over my brother!” “I love you more than anything, pick me.” Now he is like “Oh hey..”

“What’s wrong?” You ask him, nudging his shoulder a little bit.

“I just.. feel kind of miserable today.” He hides his face away into his arms on the desk. He really is not himself today.

“Hikaruuuu~ oh Hikaruuuu~” You sing.. no affect. “Okay if you are being this way meet me after school and we are going to talk about all of the stuff bothering you okay? And no saying no! I will drag you if I have to.”

He looks at you and hugs you, without saying a word you hug back. What is with him today? You end up sticking by him for the rest of the school day. When you have a class with only Kaoru it is not as awkward as you thought it would be at least

“Oh hey Kaoru.” You say to him as you sit down.

“Hello.”

He is silent too, but that can just be from last night. You go through the class with small talk. When school is over you get your stuff from your locker and wait for Hikaru. When he comes he is very sluggish.

“Okay that is it, you are coming to my house and we are going to talk in private!” You grab his hand and drag him to your house.

When you get there you realize that it could be dangerous having him alone in your house.. with you.. no one else, but he doesn’t seem like he could do anything of the sort right now. You take him up to your room, like you would with any other sad friend. You both sit on the bed and you stare at him.

“What?” He says looking at you back.

“Why are you not hitting on me?” He gives you a weird look and leans back against the wall.

“Just not into it anymore.”

“By ‘it’ do you mean me?”

“Maybe, doesn’t matter right? You like my brother better than me.”

Did.. did he find out about the two kisses you and Kaoru shared? They… they meant nothing.. well not really.. but.

“Why would you say that?” You ask, trying to remain calm.

“It is loud and clear! I have no chance. Why did I even come here.” HE starts getting up and going to the door.

You get up as well and grab his arm before he can open the door. You hold it tight and rest your head on his back.

“You idiot, who ever said that I chose him over you. I haven’t said who won yet did I?”

He then, with the other hand begins to open the door. You spin him around and push him against the door. “Are you listening?” Nothing.. “Ughh!!” You can’t handle this any more, you do the only thing you can think of. You close the gap in between your lips and kiss him.

His hand slowly makes it up to your head, he places hand on your head, while the other remains on your waist. Your arms around his neck holding him closer.

When you depart you look at each other, unsure of what really just happened.

“Do I still have a chance (f/n)?”

“You have a good chance, but so does your brother.”

“Who.. is a better kisser.”

“Ugh.. you seem back to normal.” He slyly smiles at you and leads you to the bed.

“Well your lips were like pure magic acting upon my heart!” He takes your chin and kisses you again, softly and sweet.

Not feeling like you should fight back, you give into it and kiss back. You both slowly lean back on to the bed. He holds your chin and opens your mouth a small bit. When it is open his tongue enters your mouth and explores every small detail.

After this hot make-out scene is done.. after about 10 minutes you tell him he has to go home. He sadly does so and you are home alone again.
You lay back on your bed and think about what all happened. Then you think of it then end of the week is tomorrow and this ‘game’ has been going on for long enough. You have to choose tomorrow, but who?
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[Hitachiin Twins x Reader] Love Game pt.4 by ItachiIsUchiha

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OKAY so I made this and i think I shall do a threesome lemony goodness or something (that is what I got the most for my little question thing) So i will try and all. Sorry these are so short and all ;-; I was like sneezing all over my laptop while writing it. so ashfbas

comment and stuff YEAH hehe c:

Part 1- itachiisuchiha.deviantart.com/…

Part 2: itachiisuchiha.deviantart.com/…

Part 3- itachiisuchiha.deviantart.com/…

Part 5-( Three-way lemon ) itachiisuchiha.deviantart.com/…
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Nevermoremist Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
Re-read this series and you so need to write a part 6
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ImogenStclair1 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
 
www.fanfiction.net/u/4394898/ works

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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you so much for commenting that! I never have time to get on my laptop to get the link, I hope people will see this!!
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ImTooBusySleeping Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  New Deviant
is this where the lemon is? Cause the link isn't working...
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ImogenStclair1 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
Yes yes make my insides turn to mush 
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Yes yes
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muzica95 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Student Filmographer
The link for part 5 is not working, is there another way to get to part 5?
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
There should be a a link to my fanfiction account in other comments. (I would normally paste it, but im on my phone.) If you can't find the link. I'll get it for you.
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muzica95 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Student Filmographer
k, thnx.
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Shinigami-Whisper Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The link to Part 5 isn't working >:(
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Shinigami-Whisper Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
NOO IM SO SAD I found the link but it didn't work
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Look in other comments, there shouldbe a link to my fanfiction account
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Shinigami-Whisper Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay thanks
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Nevermoremist Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015
Can't blame people for wanting both, I can't choose between either...which is one reason why I prefer Mori-Sempai lol. Too bad the link's broke but #5 is still a pretty good story even if you hafta go to another site
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Like dA always took #5 down. So I just put it on that site
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Nevermoremist Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Well that sucks. I hope they don't do that to any of mine (put first up today lol) Those two are so naughty but that's why we love em *snicker*
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Hehe yuup
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Nevermoremist Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015
*snicker*
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JewelTheCookieBeast Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Idk if you're still doing it but do you think you could note me part 5? I tried your other links but none worked. Either way I've loved the story so far!
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
 
www.fanfiction.net/u/4394898/

Tell me if this doesn't work please!
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LithiaRose Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
*whines* Is telling me 5 does not exiiisstt
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
If you look in like my replies to the like first comments or around there, there will be a link to my fanfiction account.
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LithiaRose Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Si
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Did you find it?
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LithiaRose Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Damn.
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Oh.
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LithiaRose Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Yuuus~
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JustScarletRose Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I tried all other comments but it won't show up I even tried searching for it but no luck either.
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
It would probably be in the older comments, others can find it just fine
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mirakevans Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015
Send it to mee
😵😵😵
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mirakevans Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
It didn't work 😢
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
The link should be in some of the other comments, all you have to do is look
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mirakevans Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015
How do I get to chapter 5
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:iconitachiisuchiha:
ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Look in the other comments
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music-art-are-me Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
How do I get to chapter 5?!
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:iconitachiisuchiha:
ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Look in some of the other comments then if those don't work let me know
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ChickieBruh Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student General Artist
My innocence? *poof!* gone.
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oh no
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ChickieBruh Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student General Artist
NUUUUUUUUUUU!!! i can't get to ch5! can u plz send it to me?
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Look in some of the other comments then if those don't work let me know
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LuckRose Featured By Owner Edited Dec 18, 2014
Ignore this comment....
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:iconitachiisuchiha:
ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nah
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LuckRose Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
I found what I was looking for and I don't know how to delete comments.
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Smith4812 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
Just read chapter five. My innocent mind is gone. O_O
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oh no :c
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Smith4812 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
Yep. Completely gone. Not your fault, it is mine because I made the decision to read it, so don't have any guilt if you do.
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Alright
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Smith4812 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014
*shudders* :)
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OMGimsoboredhahaha Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
It won't let me read it on fanfic
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ItachiIsUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I'll check it out when I get on my laptop
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